The hyperlinked slides reproduce the book's examples of solutions to sentence-level problems that compromise logic and clarity. Extra "template" slides are included for adding relevant examples that you might obtain from student drafts and published articles in your scientific field. To encourage class participation in your presentation of the slides, prepare a handout that lists the problematic sentences or includes them in sample paragraphs. Before presenting the slides solutions, have your students revise the sentences and explain their diagnoses and solutions.
PowerPoint Slides: Revising Sentences for Logic and Clarity